Topic: A Magic Cup
A long green-haired girl was standing in front of a school gate. It was written on the gate: Vocaloid High School. The girl smiled while looking at her school. She entered the school, and ambled to the school’s infield. She stopped walking under a big tree. There were many boys who were playing basketball, and one of those boys was the blue-haired boy named Kaito. Shion Kaito. He was awesome. The girl kept her gaze on him until an old man chewed her out. She clicked her tongue, unknowing who had just chewed her out. She turned her face to the man. Shoot! It was the headmaster! His name was Kiyoteru Himaya. The students called him Kiyoteru-sensei. That was how the students greeted a teacher. Kiyoteru-sensei seemed to search something lost from her appearance.
A long green-haired girl was standing in front of a school gate. It was written on the gate: Vocaloid High School. The girl smiled while looking at her school. She entered the school, and ambled to the school’s infield. She stopped walking under a big tree. There were many boys who were playing basketball, and one of those boys was the blue-haired boy named Kaito. Shion Kaito. He was awesome. The girl kept her gaze on him until an old man chewed her out. She clicked her tongue, unknowing who had just chewed her out. She turned her face to the man. Shoot! It was the headmaster! His name was Kiyoteru Himaya. The students called him Kiyoteru-sensei. That was how the students greeted a teacher. Kiyoteru-sensei seemed to search something lost from her appearance.
“Where’s
your name tag?” he asked. The girl scratched her head while smiling. She forgot
to put her name tag. It was okay, she brought it. She showed it to Kiyoteru-sensei.
It was written: Hatsune Miku. Kiyoteru-sensei nodded, and left without saying other
words. What a weird old man, the girl named Miku said inwardly. Their
headmaster was a hilarious person, but sometimes he could be a monster. He was
also often ordering people to do something ridiculous.
Miku
turned her gaze back to the boys, but she saw something shiny was being brought
by a cat near the corner of the field. The cat put it and left it there. What’s that? She inquired. She got interested
in that shiny thing. It could be a small clod of gold. Well, it’s too big to be
gold, but who knows? She thought. She walked slowly to the edge of the field,
but she didn’t realize a ball was coming to her head, ready to hit her. After a
while, a big thud was heard. Miku was fallen to the ground, but she was awake. All
of the boys surrounded her. She felt someone took her body, but she remembered about
the shiny thing. She opened her eyes at once and made all of the boys startled.
She asked Kaito to put her down. Wait, Kaito? Miku shook her head slowly. It
was Kaito who took her several seconds ago. Well, the important thing was to
take the shiny thing though.
“I’m
okay,” said Miku while smiling. Then, she tried to break through the crowd by
walking in stagger. She took the shiny thing and put it into her bag. No one
knew because she covered the thing by her body. The boys were still looking at
her. She smiled again before she walked away. After her fourth steps, she was
fainted. Luckily, someone caught her before she fell.
Miku
opened her eyes. She found herself was in the school medical unit. She wondered
how long had she slept in that place. She looked at someone who was sitting
next to her. He was Kaito. She saw Kaito was holding a cup. She remembered that
the shiny thing was a cup, and it might be the cup. Miku checked her bag and
didn’t find it anywhere. Then, she looked at Kaito. He seemed to be angry with
her.
“Are
you a moron?! Walking to the field mindlessly!” he reproved her. Miku just kept
quiet. She thought Kaito was so gentle, but he could be angry.
“You
walked there just to take this cup? What a moron!” he kept mumbling. Miku
looked at his angry face, but couldn’t say a word although she was so sensitive
with the bad words such as ‘moron’.
“It’s
easy Kaito, you can let her rest for a while,” someone appeared behind Kaito.
She was so beautiful. Her hair was long and shiny. It was pink coloured. She
looked very feminine.
“Feel
better, Miku?” she asked. Miku nodded.
“I’m
Luka, nice to meet you,” Luka said.
“She
is your senior, so you must be polite to her,” Kaito said to Miku with a
menacing aura.
Suddenly,
an announcement was heard through the microphone. It was the headmaster. Miku,
Luka and Kaito left the room and stood in the corridor. All of the students and
teachers did the same thing. Once they heard the headmaster’s voice through the
microphone, they had to get out of the classes or whatever it was.
“Attention!
This is very dangerous! Listen carefully! Anyone who can find a little brown
cup will get a big price, and I want you to find it!” he said. The atmosphere
became noisy. All of the students and teachers were asking around. Kaito and
Miku stared each other. A cup?
“Search
anywhere possible, and do it quickly! This is a very urgent mission for you!”
the headmaster said again. All of the students became quiet. They said no
words. No sounds.
“YOU
WILL DO IT NOW OR YOU WILL GET SUSPENDED FROM SCHOOL!” the old man shouted
loudly through the microphone, and it made all of the people scattered all at
once. They ran to all directions in hurry. Miku took the cup from Kaito and hid
it. She went back to the medical room to take her bag and put the cup in. When
she went out of the room, there were so many people squeezed through in the
corridor, and because of the fast movement of the people, her bag slipped from
her shoulder. Luckily, someone took it. It was Kaito! He aimed Miku to go with
him, and brought Miku to trail after him. They went upstairs to the separated
room in front of the field; the headmaster room. They stayed there until
someone came to that place. They sat back to back while panting to get breath.
No one was there, so they could take a rest. Five minutes left, and the
crowding people were still busy on their job to find the cup.
Miku
took a glance on Kaito who was kept quiet since they arrived there. He had blue
hair and dark blue eyes. His eyes were like the blue sapphire. They were very
beautiful. When she was looking at his face, he turned his eyes on hers and it
made Miku got shocked. She turned her face straightaway.
“Someone’s
coming,” he said. Miku didn’t realize it. She saw the headmaster running toward
them. He might assume they had found the cup. Why? Is the cup so valuable? Miku
inquired.
“Why
are you here? Have you found the cup?” he asked. Miku and Kaito stared each
other. Then, they nodded and smiled to each other as if they were connected by
something. Miku and Kaito stared at the headmaster. Kaito gave a sign to Miku
for not to show the cup yet. The headmaster felt something strange. He assumed
that the two had found the cup, and they wanted the price. Then, the headmaster
asked them to come to his office. Miku and Kaito sat for a long time. They were
waiting for the promised big price, but it was strange. The headmaster seemed
to think while bustling around. He didn’t show anything as a price.
“What
are you doing Sensei? We have been waiting for almost 8 minutes, and you
haven’t given the price yet?” Kaito said. Miku nudged him fretfully. How dare
he say something like that to a headmaster?! Her inner reproved.
“You
haven’t shown the cup yet,” he replied. Miku sharpened her sight. It was more
looked like he didn’t have anything to give as a price. Miku looked at Kaito.
He nodded. Then, Miku took out the cup. The headmaster looked to be shocked. He
took the cup and asked them a lot of questions, but both of them didn’t reply
every single question. They insisted to take the price from the headmaster.
Kiyoteru-sensei became confuse. Actually, he gave an order without thinking
about the risks. He offered the big price without unknowing what will be given,
and unfortunately, he had nothing right at that moment. No money. No medal. No
goblet. It was nothing.
“How
careless...” Kaito mumbled. Miku stepped on his foot. Really, she thought Kaito
was a good man, but he was unfathomable.
“Okay,
listen my students,” Kiyoteru-sensei took a deep breath, “I don’t have anything
to give to you, so-”
“It
can’t be helped, we will take the cup bac-“ Kaito tried to say a word, but Miku
interrupted his words,
“No,
it’s surely yours Sensei,” said Miku.
“By
the way, it is really hot around here,” Kaito took the cup to get some drink,
but the headmaster took the teapot before Kaito did.
“What
are you doing? I’m thirsty, let me drink,” Kaito tried to get the teapot. Miku
shook her head to see their behavior. They weren’t looked like a headmaster and
a student.
“Let
me drink or I'm not going to give this cup to you!”
“No,
no, no! You're not going to do that,”
“Then
let me drink first!”
“No
way if I let you drink with that magic cup!”
Miku
sharpened her hearing. Did she just hear ‘magic cup’? Kaito and Miku stared
each other. Kiyoteru-sensei covered his face with his hands. Miku took the cup
from Kaito and observed the cup, but it was just a cup somehow. Kiyoteru-sensei
scratched his head. He had already said it.
“It’s
just a cup,” Miku said.
“No,
no, no, it’s a magic cup! I-I mean... yes, it’s just a cup!” Kiyoteru-sensei
stuttered. Miku and Kaito started to distrust him. They looked at him with a
sharp glare.
“It-it’s
dirty, you must wash it before you drink, and I’m not going to let my students
drink by a dirty cup,” Kiyoteru-sensei tried to argue. Kaito shook his head. He
said he had already washed it when he was waiting for Miku in the medical unit.
Kaito and Miku stared each other. Kiyoteru-sensei took the cup and gave them
two tickets to the cinema which movie would be played on the next two weeks. Miku
looked at the ticket. ‘What is this?’ Miku asked inwardly, ‘He has promised to
give a big price, and look what we got?’
“Excuse
me; could you please give us another price? This price is not even suitable to
be called as a price!” Kaito said.
“I
will give you something another time, so just keep it and get away from now!”
The
word ‘magic cup’ still stayed on Miku's head. Was it true? It had been three days
since she found the cup. She had read a lot of books about the fairy tales of
the magic cup. The book said that a magic cup could fulfill any wishes. Anyone
could ask everything they wanted after drinking from the cup. Miku kept
thinking about that. She started to think to ‘borrow’ the cup. It would be
great if that tiny cup could make her dreams come true. She didn’t think
anything but to ‘borrow’ the cup. Just like at the moment, she was still at the
outside of the headmaster room. She looked inside through the window.
Kiyoteru-sensei wasn’t there. All of the teachers were in a meeting. Good, but
she needed to find the key to come in first. She looked around to find another
way out. Gotcha! She saw an opened window. She passed her gaze around. After
ensuring that there is no one who saw her, she went inside. She searched
everywhere possible, but she couldn’t find the cup. Shoot, it had been 30
minutes since her coming there. She had to find it soon. She tried to search in
a vase near the door, and she found it! She didn’t want to waste her time, so
she took a teapot and pour it into the cup. She took a deep breath before
drinking the water. She stated her wish in her heart while smiling. After that,
she took the cup with her. It was time to go to the class because the meeting
was about to be over. She went out of the office. She didn’t realize that she was
being spied by someone.
“This
is bad!” Kiyoteru-sensei scratched his head. He lost the cup. He surely put the
cup in the vase, but it had gone. It was impossible that the cup went by
itself. Suddenly, he remembered that only Kaito and Miku were the ones who knew
about the magic cup. He called them immediately.
Miku
was in front of her locker when she heard her name was called. She was about to
put the cup into her locker, but wait. She couldn’t find the cup in her bag!
She was perfectly sure that she put the cup in her bag right after she came
back to the class, but it had gone. It should be in her bag. Where else might
it be? When she was in panic, Kaito appeared from the corridor.
“What
are you doing? You are called to the office,” he said.
“I
can’t go now!” she replied in panic, “I-I have to look for something, so I
can’t go,”
“Is
that so important? You need help?” Kaito offered her an aid. Miku raised her
left brow. What was it all about? Why he was so nice to her? He was so
abominable before today. Whatever, she had to find the cup first!
“Just
tell Kiyoteru-sensei that I have to do something!” said Miku while walking away
from him. Kaito frowned. There’s something strange, his inner said.
Miku
arrived at her class. She searched for the cup everywhere, but she couldn’t
find it. She kept searching until she felt tired. She took a deep breath,
“Why
is this happened to me? Why I have to borrow the cup and make a mess like this?
What if someone use it to do the crime?!” she reproved at herself.
“So,
that’s the problem!”
She
heard a voice. She was very surprised, it was Kaito! Did he hear my words?
Miku’s inner asked. Kaito came near her and stood right in front of her.
“So,
you are the one who stole the cup? It’s too bad for a thief to be robbed by
another thief,” Kaito asked. Miku scratched her head. She had no idea how to
argue his words. Well, because he was right. She just ‘borrowed without
permission’ which meant ‘stole’ the cup.
“It
was an accident! I just borrowed it, and I swear I saved the cup in my bag, but
it was gone!” said Miku. Kaito sighed. He recalled their meeting in the office
a few days ago. The ones who knew about the magic cup were only Miku,
Kiyoteru-sensei and himself. Who else might it be?
“Then
I’m sure someone had eavesdropped to our conversation,”
Miku
and Kaito stared each other. They had to tell the headmaster about this serious
problem.
They
went to the headmaster room and entered the room. They were very shocked to see
their headmaster collapsed on the floor while holding a paper. It was written
there: ‘Anyone who is seeing me like this, please don’t call ambulance or
something, I just need a boy and a girl named Kaito and Miku to be here.’ Kaito
and Miku looked at their pathetic headmaster.
“Sensei,
we’ve already here,” said Kaito.
“Really?!”
Kiyoteru-sensei got up straightaway, “Do you know about the cup’s whereabouts?”
Kaito
and Miku shook their head. Kaito told Kiyoteru-sensei that the cup was stolen
by another people who eavesdropped to their conversation about the magic cup,
and it must be very hard to find who the thief was. With a very uneasy feeling,
the headmaster told his story about the magic cup. Why the cup was so important
and valuable. He told about the consequences of using the cup. After making a
wish, the wish maker had to fulfill the remuneration. It was not easy. They had
to pass one week in a bad luck. Miku opened her eyes widely. A bad luck? Kaito
and Miku stared each other.
“Sensei,
actually... I was the one who borrowed your cup, but lately...” Miku stared at
Kaito.
“The
cup itself was stolen by another person,” Kaito added.
Kiyoteru-sensei
gaped for a long time. He didn’t expect that Miku would do something like that,
and it looked like that she was helped by Kaito. Kaito knew what was being
thought by Kiyoteru-sensei, so he explained things from the beginning since he
knew that Miku was the one who stole the cup. After a long discussion,
Kiyoteru-sensei decided to keep Kaito and Miku together with him. Three of them
had to find the way to catch the thief. Starting from today, they had six more
days to go. This was an arcane mission, so they had to be careful.
Kiyoteru-sensei gave them a dispensation for not joining the class activity for
one week. Miku and Kaito knew it was crazy, but they had to find that dangerous
magic cup as soon as possible.
The
first mission was started. Miku and Kaito went around the school, checked if
something went wrong with people. A strange thing started to happen. When they
walked to the library, Miku didn’t see the ‘wet-floor’ sign, so she just walked
on the slick floor. She was almost slipped if Kaito didn’t catch her. Another strange
thing was when they went to the school’s auditorium by crossing the infield.
They never expected there would be a ball coming from behind since there was no
one who was playing basketball. The ball was about to hit Miku’s head, but
Kaito covered her with his body, so the ball hit his head.
“Kaito!”
Miku yelled.
“Are
you okay?!” someone shouted while running toward them. Kaito shook his head.
His sight became unclear, but he was still conscious. That was a very strong
hit. Miku thought it was her fault. She dragged him into this. Kiyoteru-sensei
saw the accident from the distance and called Miku to bring him to the medical
unit.
Today’s
mission was over with Kaito hurt on the head. Miku felt guilty about the things
happened today. She never expected that the cup would bring sort of calamity to
her and even to the people around her. Therefore, she decided to stay away from
Kaito and Kiyoteru-sensei. From the next days on, she would try not to meet and
talk with them. It might be the only way.
It
went good. She didn’t see the strange things happened to Kaito, but her days
became worse. On the second day, she lost her shoes, so she had to wear sandal
to go home. On the third day, she was chased by a wild dog along the way home. On
the fourth day, she got scolded by her seniors because she was caught of spying
on them. On the fifth day, she thought she found the thief. When she walked to
the medical unit to take a rest, she saw a girl with the long pink hair entered
the medical unit while hiding something. Miku kept her gaze on her. She
recognized the girl. She was Luka-senpai. Miku thought it was impossible if
Luka was the one who stole the cup. When she was about to greet Luka, she saw
Kaito was walking toward her. Kaito accosted her with a charming greet. Miku
looked grim at once. Getting upset, she walked toward them.
“Hello,
Luka-senpai,” Miku greeted Luka. It was polite to add ‘-senpai’ right after
their senior’s first name. Luka just smiled to her.
“What
are you doing here?” Kaito asked Miku in a bothered tone. Miku frowned at him.
What’s his problem? Something is getting weird here, Miku’s inner said. Miku
looked at Luka as if she distrusted her. It might be... Miku looked at her
hands. She was right, Luka was hiding something. Miku started her plan.
“Okay
then, have a nice day, bye!” Miku clapped Luka’s shoulder. Suddenly, a cup was
dropped from Luka’s back. Luckily, the cup wasn’t broken. Miku and Kaito stared
each other. Kaito picked up the cup.
“Is
it...?” Miku asked,
“Yeah,
this is the cup,” Kaito looked at Luka, “Luka-senpai, are you-”
“I
just borrowed it,” Luka interrupted Kaito’s words, “From Miku,” she pointed at Miku.
“That’s
not the problem Luka-senpai! How many times have you drunk from this cup?” Miku
asked.
“Several
times,” Luke replied,
“Have
you heard the con-“
“I
know the consequences,”
Luka said. She stared at Kaito, “I did it just because I want Kaito to stay
away from you,”
“Me?”
Kaito pointed at himself. Miku was surprised. Did she like Kaito? Miku looked
at Kaito whose face was blushing as well. Luka’s wish had made her plan went
well. Miku remembered at the first time, she decided not to meet and talk with
Kaito, and it went well. She never met and talked with Kaito, but she watched
him in the distance.
“By
any chance, we have to return it to the headmaster!” Miku took the cup from
Kaito. Then she ran away. Kaito was trailing after her, leaving Luka who was
speechless.
Right
on the stairs to the headmaster room, Miku was slipped. The cup was thrown to
the air. It was heading the little fountain near the stairs. Kaito was unable
to reach both of Miku and the cup because he was still too far from them. Miku
didn’t let the cup broken, she jumped to the air and caught the cup, but she
fell to the fountain. As the result, her uniform became wet.
“Are
you okay? Come here and quickly!” Kaito gave his a hand. Miku gripped his hand.
“Good
grief! Now you are all wet! What are you doing? Are you still a moron?! You
could’ve let it-“
“You
saved me! You saved my life!” someone yelled. Miku and Kaito passed their gaze
around, but they couldn’t find anyone there. Then, something came up from the
cup. Miku and Kaito couldn’t believe what had they seen. It was a fairy! She
was flying over Miku’s head.
“Who
are you?” Kaito asked to the fairy.
“I’m
Rin! And I’m the guardian of this cup!” the fairy replied, “I’m the one who set
your calamity,”
Miku
put Rin on her palms, “Are you really a fairy?” she asked. Rin nodded,
“I
can remove your calamity. You drank from this cup, didn’t you?” Rin asked.
“Yes,
yes! Then, I still have two days in calamity, you can remove it now!” Miku said
excitedly. Rin shook her head.
“I
have a condition,” Rin said, “If you want to be free from your calamity, you
have to be honest with yourself and tell what you’ve wished,”
“What?”
Miku was shocked. She had to be honest in front of someone she was in love
with?!
“Do
it now if you want to be free from your calamity,” Rin said. Miku’s face turned
red straightaway.
“What
is it about?! I don’t want to miss this!” Kiyoteru-sensei came from his room,
“Rin? Is that you?” Kiyoteru-sensei came near Miku and Kaito. Rin was smiled to
him,
“Yo!”
“What
happened?” Kiyoteru-sensei asked. Rin told him everything, and the best part
was on Miku. Rin told him that Miku would telll her wish. Kaito,
Kiyoteru-sensei and Rin stared at her as if they wanted to eat her. No!
“No,
no, no! Why have I to be honest in front of these people?!” Miku asked Rin. Rin
shrugged her shoulders. She said if there weren’t any other people, she could
just tell Rin about her wish, but at that time, there were standing Kaito and
Kiyoteru-sensei in front of her.
Miku took a deep breath. She had to be honest in front
of Kiyoteru-sensei, Rin, and Kaito himself.
“I
wished...” Miku started her words. Kaito looked at her as if he expected
something from her words.
“I
wished that Kaito would fall in love with me!” she yelled loudly. One minute
left in a silence. She was pretty sure that her face was red. In another
minute, Rin, Kaito and Kiyoteru-sensei laughed at her. What is so funny? Her inner
asked.
“You
know what Miku? Deceitful doesn’t worth anything, you have to gain your own
ability to reach what you want, that’s why I made the calamity,” Rin said, “To help
them to reach their dreams with the worse way which will make them stronger to
face the truth,”
Miku
nodded. She had been free. She looked at Kaito who was smiling at her.
“Excuse
me,” Luka appeared behind Miku. Rin recognized Luka.
“I
want to ask you-“
“You
have been free from your calamity, Luka,” Rin interrupted Luka’s words. She
nodded and thanked Rin. Then, she saw Miku and Kaito and walked near them.
“So,
tell me Kaito, which one will you choose, Miku or Luka?” Rin asked Kaito. Luka
and Miku stared each other with blushing face. Kaito froze on his feet
standing. Rin and Kiyoteru-sensei laughed at him.
“I
have to go now, there will be a sunset,” Rin said while looking at her friends’
face one by one. There were Kiyoteru-sensei, Miku, Luka, and Kaito. They went
to the beach to say goodbye to Rin. The fairy’s family had been waiting for Rin.
“I
will miss you,” said Miku. Rin gave her a kiss on the cheek. Then she left
after saying goodbye to her friends. After that, the cup was no longer a magic
cup. Miku asked Kiyoteru-sensei why Rin didn’t bring the cup with her. Then,
Kiyoteru-sensei told a story. Before Rin became the cup guardian, she was a
naughty fairy. She caused many troubles for her family, so she was punished to
guard a cup.
“So,
the magic cup is only a cup for now,” Kaito said. Miku nodded. They stared each
other for a long moment until Luka came and crushed everything.
“You’re
not supposed to get close to each other, Kaito, Miku,” Luka showed her ominous
aura, “Let’s get the party started!”
“What
party?” Miku and Kaito asked.
“Come
on!” Kiyoteru-sensei waved his hand in front of a roaster. Miku, Kaito and Luka
ran to Kiyoteru-sensei to help him prepared the food. Today, they had a lot of
fun, and it was a really good day.
Fin.
1. Focus/Organization:
ReplyDeletea. It fulfills the purpose of narrative text by telling an interesting story.
b. The story has a strong beginning.
c. Time order is used.
Score: 30/35
2. Style/Elaboration
a. Every sentence is important.
b. There is enough detail provided to describe the setting of time and place.
c. There is realistic dialogue to make the story more interesting.
d. There are transitional signals to help move the story along.
Score: 30/35
Grammar/Usage and Mechanics:
a. The strory is free of misspelling, and words are capitalized correctly.
b. Sentences are punctuated correctly, and it is free of fragments and run on.
c. It uses standard English.
Score: 30/30
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